Monday, November 30, 2009

Microfiction Monday: Return of the Native



Tires crunched gravel.

"Someone's here," he said, kissing her bare shoulder.

A door opened.

"I'm back. I changed my mind about the divorce."

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Want to play? Go to www.stonyriver.ie to learn how. The rules are simple: Susan provides the picture, you write a story in 140 characters (includes spaces and punctuation). Sound easy? Wait til you try!

12 comments:

Peggy said...

This was a good one, love in the afternoon! The husband will have to forgive her, sounds like the divorce was his idea! So for a few brief moments, she thought she was almost free!
What will happen...?

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

Nice, now what is going to happen, hope the Husband can forgive.

Granny Sue said...

Hmmm...or maybe she'd just as soon he stayed gone?

Susan at Stony River said...

D'oh!
What an answer to 'Honey I'm home' ROFL I can just see all their faces! I love what you do with these.

Barbara H. said...

Uh oh! Somebody's in trouble!

Thom said...

Ooops....some one is going to be in big trouble. Well done my friend. I really enjoyed this :)

hope said...

Wow, talk about bad timing!

I'm still amazed in how many directions we run with one picture. :)

SouthLakesMom said...

Oh - I like this one! Just when she was getting used to the jerk being gone...intrigue!

Granny Sue said...

It is so much fun to read what everyone else wrote on this prompt. I may nto get to read everyone's every time, but I'll certainly try.

Tink said...

Womans prerogative I'd guess!

Granny Sue said...

LOL, Tink! Now she's got to choose-or maybe not. Maybe she tells them both to leave? So many possibilities...

Mrs. D. said...

Tight. Shades of "Story of an Hour" by Kate Chopin.

Related Posts Plugin for WordPress, Blogger...