Monday, August 30, 2010

Microfiction Monday: Too Cool for Comfort


B believed the best bands were in Belpre.

C considered Coolville the cats of consummate coolness.

Weighted by alliteration, the boat sank.

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16 comments:

TheresaandJay said...

Way too good Susie! :)

Mama Badger said...

Nice! Made me smile (and maybe giggle a little.)

Ellie said...

He. . .he. That was a good un. Thank you!

Have a lovely week x

SouthLakesMom said...

Got a BIG GRIN with this one...Alliteration is often awesome.

Granny Sue said...

And I should have said "anchored by alliteration..." Just thought of it :)

Thanks for reading!

Diane said...

Fun! I enjoyed it :O)

Granny Sue said...

Thanks, Diane!

Pat said...

I love alliteration a lot, so your post was perfect for me, Pat.

quilly said...

Well what did they have a boat out there oon the road for anyway?! Sheesh.

hope said...

And the Grammar Award goes to.... ;)

Nessa said...

Absolutely awesome alliterative anecdote.

mamabug said...

Really enjoyed that! Added a little smile to my day.

Granny Sue said...

Well, there was a river on the other side of that sign--can't you see it, quilly? ;)

Thanks for the grammar award, Hope. I think. Now I'm wondering if I made some huge grammatical error!

Nessa, you're good at this stuff!

Thanks to all for your comments :)

Akelamalu said...

Oh, very clever Granny Sue, I like it. :)

Jaime said...

Divers descended to the depths of the disaster...

Tee hee, this is fun!

Aaron

Susan at Stony River said...

Jazzy, I love it!

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