Monday, November 15, 2010

Microfiction Monday: The Lie


Ana dressed in men's attire
and traveled miles her lover to find,
but she found he was just a liar,
so she left him behind.

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7 comments:

sylviamorice said...

Poor Ana...will she ever learn to trust men again??? Stay tuned...LOL
Great MM. Cheers!

Peggy said...

Good one! I think Ana is a good judge of character.
Have a great week Granny Sue>

Susan Fobes said...

Nice take this week-very original poem...

libithina said...

the snake in the grass (Ooops cactus) :)
fun

Granny Sue said...

Thanks all! Coming to see your MM's now.

Maria@BubblegumandDuctTape said...

nice poem, I love it. Poor Ana, will she ever love again???

Pat said...

Bravo, Ana! I like her persistence. She should become a private investigator.

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