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Monday, November 15, 2010

Microfiction Monday: The Lie


Ana dressed in men's attire
and traveled miles her lover to find,
but she found he was just a liar,
so she left him behind.

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7 comments:

  1. Poor Ana...will she ever learn to trust men again??? Stay tuned...LOL
    Great MM. Cheers!

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  2. Good one! I think Ana is a good judge of character.
    Have a great week Granny Sue>

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  3. Nice take this week-very original poem...

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  4. the snake in the grass (Ooops cactus) :)
    fun

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  5. Thanks all! Coming to see your MM's now.

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  6. nice poem, I love it. Poor Ana, will she ever love again???

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  7. Bravo, Ana! I like her persistence. She should become a private investigator.

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