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Monday, August 30, 2010

Microfiction Monday: Too Cool for Comfort


B believed the best bands were in Belpre.

C considered Coolville the cats of consummate coolness.

Weighted by alliteration, the boat sank.

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16 comments:

  1. Nice! Made me smile (and maybe giggle a little.)

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  2. He. . .he. That was a good un. Thank you!

    Have a lovely week x

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  3. Got a BIG GRIN with this one...Alliteration is often awesome.

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  4. And I should have said "anchored by alliteration..." Just thought of it :)

    Thanks for reading!

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  5. I love alliteration a lot, so your post was perfect for me, Pat.

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  6. Well what did they have a boat out there oon the road for anyway?! Sheesh.

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  7. And the Grammar Award goes to.... ;)

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  8. Absolutely awesome alliterative anecdote.

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  9. Really enjoyed that! Added a little smile to my day.

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  10. Well, there was a river on the other side of that sign--can't you see it, quilly? ;)

    Thanks for the grammar award, Hope. I think. Now I'm wondering if I made some huge grammatical error!

    Nessa, you're good at this stuff!

    Thanks to all for your comments :)

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  11. Oh, very clever Granny Sue, I like it. :)

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  12. Divers descended to the depths of the disaster...

    Tee hee, this is fun!

    Aaron

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